This is my preliminary sequence. I feel that it is a good first effort, yet could be better. Things we did do well was the use of different shots such as, high-angle shots and worm's eye view shots. Our use of match on action is good and clear, and is our tightest piece of editing. Our speech is clear, and creates a sense of character.
However, the speech sequence could do with a few more camera angles. We continuously use a shot-reverse-shot, yet we could include two-shots for example. At times our pace doesn't match the intensity. For example, the stair sequence is slower than the approach.
Taking this into account, I hope I can produce a better sequence for my opening sequence.
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