Feedback

From the internal viewings I can see that there are a view areas, of which I can pick up on. This include:

• More creative shots during the phone call convo.
• The text message shot could be a bit longer, to enable the audience time to read the texts. 
• Can see the reflection of the camera-man in the car - this can be cropped.
• The first scene, I couldn't be seen clearly.
• Some angles were seen as confusing.
• Clearer talking
• Possibly reduce the noise in the background - e.g. wind and traffic
• Extreme close up of Jono's eyes could be longer.

Me and my group, will look at these issues and attempt to improve our film. This is all good, reasonable feedback that is useful to us, and lets us know what issues we have had.